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55 Reviews | 3 w/ Responses
Well, this is a good flash movie! But here are some suggestions.
If your making a Halloween movie, then include violence. I know you showed some blood, but Halloween movies need violence gore and such, which will totally scare the audience and land you 5 stars!
Try including a storyline.
Next time, make the monster, something more....MONSTER, this monster looks like a scribbling with a pen.
Sound effects would be a very nice touch
Voice actors for the characters.
I hope I've been some help, mate!
Author's Response:
Not enough blood?
What movies have YOU been watching?
Also, the monster was kinda made to look that way.
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Did anyone see the Nose Bleed Hurt? When the Lucky Girl or w/e was bleeding from the nose she leaned back and it said Nose Bleed and further-right down HURT weird o_O
Author's Response:
Indeed it did >:)
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I cant believei laughed XD! You should make a full version it would be very LOL
Author's Response:
It would be very Laugh Out Loud.
Once you read that sentence, it really doesn't make sense.
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